ChatsGPT 3.5 & 4 write & rewrite scenes for a Darwin Biopic - A Case Study
ChatsGPT 3.5 & 4 write & rewrite scenes for a Darwin Biopic - A Case Study
Velikovsky of Newcastle
5th June 02023
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As context, see:
ChatGPTs 3 & 4 Help Plot a Film About Charles Darwin's Life (A 3 x 3 Essayicle)
And now, read on...
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Model: Default (ChatGPT-3.5)[image error][image error]Given these 3 scenes (below) in the film "Charles Darwin - A Hero's Journey":Scene # Film Plot Event/Scene Estimated Scene Duration (Mins)/Number of Script Pages Year/s1 Opening film credits over a montage of 1820 England 1 18202 Young Charles Darwin is fascinated by nature 1 18203 Darwin's father disapproves his interest in nature 1 1825 [end of first 3 scenes]Below is the the first 3 scenes (first 3 pages) of film screenplay for this 90-minute/90 page feature film script about Charles Darwin, written by ChatGPT4: FADE IN:TITLE: CHARLES DARWIN - A HERO'S JOURNEYScene 1. EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820Super: 1820, EnglandA montage of the English countryside. Lush green fields, a small village, children playing, farmers working.NARRATOR (V.O.)England, 1820. A time of change, a time of discovery...FADE TO:Scene 2. INT. DARWIN HOME - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAYYoung CHARLES DARWIN, 12, is at his desk, engrossed in a book about nature. He looks out the window, fascinated by a bird flying by.NARRATOR (V.O.)Young Charles Darwin, fascinated by the world around him...FADE TO:Scene 3. INT. DARWIN HOME - STUDY - DAYCharles' father, ROBERT DARWIN, 50, stern and serious, enters the room. He looks at Charles disapprovingly.ROBERTCharles, you need to focus on your studies. This fascination with nature will lead you nowhere.FADE OUT.Please note that this is a very basic example and a real screenplay would include more detail, character development, and dialogue. Also, the formatting might not be perfect due to the limitations of this text box. Screenplays are usually written in software like Final Draft or Celtx that automatically formats the text to industry standards.Can you Expand each of those 3 scenes out, to 1 script page in length each, so it's 3 pages total, for the first 3 scenes of the movie.ChatGPTCertainly! Here's an expanded version of the first three scenes, each extended to approximately one script page in length:
FADE IN:
TITLE: CHARLES DARWIN - A HERO'S JOURNEY
Scene 1. EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820
Super: 1820, England
A montage of the English countryside. Lush green fields stretch out as far as the eye can see, dotted with colorful wildflowers. A small village comes into view, its cottages exuding a sense of rustic charm. Children run and play in the streets, their laughter echoing through the air. Farmers toil in the fields, their backs bent as they tend to their crops. Life thrives in this idyllic setting.
NARRATOR (V.O.)England, 1820. A time of change, a time of discovery...
FADE TO:
Scene 2. INT. DARWIN HOME - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAY
Young CHARLES DARWIN, 12, sits at his cluttered desk in his bedroom. Sunlight filters through the window, casting a warm glow on the room. Open books and sketches of animals cover the desk, evidence of Charles' insatiable curiosity. He flips through the pages of a beautifully illustrated book about nature, his eyes widening with wonder at the intricate drawings of plants and animals.
NARRATOR (V.O.)Young Charles Darwin, fascinated by the world around him...
Charles looks up from his book and gazes out the window. A flash of color catches his attention as a bird soars gracefully through the sky. Entranced, he follows its flight with wide-eyed excitement.
FADE TO:
Scene 3. INT. DARWIN HOME - STUDY - DAY
Charles' father, ROBERT DARWIN, 50, a stern and serious man, enters the room. The study is filled with shelves lined with dusty books and scientific instruments. Robert's disapproving gaze falls upon Charles, who quickly closes his book and stands up, nervously.
ROBERTCharles, you need to focus on your studies. This fascination with nature will lead you nowhere.
Charles lowers his gaze, his shoulders slumping slightly. He longs to share his passion with his father but knows he will not understand.
CHARLES(softly)But Father, nature is a world of endless wonders. I want to explore it, understand it.
Robert's expression softens for a moment as he looks at his son, torn between his own desires for Charles and the societal expectations weighing on them both.
ROBERT(sighs)Charles, I want what's best for you. But you must also consider your future. Science, proper education, those are the paths to success.
Charles nods, disappointed yet determined to continue pursuing his passion in secret.
FADE OUT.
Please note that this expanded version includes additional details, dialogue, and character development to enhance the scenes.
[image error][image error]Expand it out further.ChatGPTCertainly! Here's an expanded version of the first three scenes, further developed to approximately one script page each:
FADE IN:
TITLE: CHARLES DARWIN - A HERO'S JOURNEY
Scene 1. EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820
Super: 1820, England
A montage of the English countryside. Lush green fields stretch out as far as the eye can see, painted with vibrant colors of wildflowers swaying in the gentle breeze. In the distance, a small village emerges, its thatched cottages exuding a sense of rustic charm. Laughter fills the air as children run and play in the cobbled streets. Hardworking farmers tend to their crops, their sun-kissed faces showing the toil and perseverance that define their lives.
NARRATOR (V.O.)England, 1820. A time of change, a time of discovery...
FADE TO:
Scene 2. INT. DARWIN HOME - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAY
Young CHARLES DARWIN, 12, sits in his bedroom, surrounded by shelves filled with books and specimens. His desk is cluttered with open volumes, pages of sketches, and magnifying glasses. Sunlight pours through the window, casting a warm glow on the room. Charles is engrossed in a beautifully illustrated book about nature, his eyes scanning the pages with a hunger for knowledge. His fingers delicately trace the intricate details of plant structures and the contours of exotic animals.
NARRATOR (V.O.)Young Charles Darwin, fascinated by the world around him...
Suddenly, a movement catches Charles' eye. He looks out the window and spots a colorful bird gracefully soaring across the sky. The sight captivates him, and a wide smile stretches across his face. He rushes to the window, pressing his palms against the glass as if trying to touch the bird's freedom.
FADE TO:
Scene 3. INT. DARWIN HOME - STUDY - DAY
Charles' father, ROBERT DARWIN, 50, a stern and serious man, enters the study. The room is filled with shelves lined with dusty books, maps, and scientific instruments. Robert's piercing gaze falls upon Charles, who quickly closes his book and stands up, a mix of excitement and apprehension evident on his face.
ROBERT(disapprovingly)Charles, you need to focus on your studies. This fascination with nature will lead you nowhere.
Charles lowers his gaze, his enthusiasm deflating under his father's disapproval. He struggles to find the right words to express his deep connection with the natural world.
CHARLES(softly, earnestly)But Father, nature is not just a distraction. It's a source of endless wonders and possibilities. Exploring it, understanding it, could lead to discoveries that benefit us all.
Robert's stern expression softens for a moment as he looks at his son, torn between his own aspirations for Charles and the weight of societal expectations.
ROBERT(sighs)Charles, I want what's best for you. But the path to success lies in proper education, in science. You must consider your future and the opportunities that lie ahead.
Charles nods, a mixture of disappointment and determination in his eyes. He understands his father's concerns but also knows that his passion for nature burns too brightly to be extinguished.
CHARLES(resolute)I hear you, Father. I'll focus on my studies, but I won't abandon my love for nature. I will find a way to pursue it, even if it's in my own time.
Robert studies his son, recognizing the determination in Charles' eyes. He reaches out and places a hand on Charles' shoulder, a fleeting moment of understanding passing between them.
ROBERT(softly)You're your own person, Charles. Just remember to keep your dreams alive, even as you navigate the expectations of the world.
Charles smiles, a glimmer of hope reigniting within him.
FADE OUT.
Please note that this expanded version adds more sensory details, introspection, and emotional depth to each scene while further developing the relationship between Charles and his father.
[image error][image error]Expand it out further.ChatGPTCertainly! Here's an expanded version of the first three scenes, further developed to approximately one script page each:
FADE IN:
TITLE: CHARLES DARWIN - A HERO'S JOURNEY
Scene 1. EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820
Super: 1820, England
The camera sweeps over the picturesque English countryside. Lush green fields stretch out like an endless quilt, dotted with wildflowers of every color. A small village comes into view, its thatched cottages nestled among the rolling hills. The sound of children's laughter fills the air as they chase each other through the cobbled streets. Farmers toil in the fields, their weathered faces etched with determination and resilience.
NARRATOR (V.O.)England, 1820. A time of change, a time of discovery...
FADE TO:
Scene 2. INT. DARWIN HOME - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAY
Young CHARLES DARWIN, 12, sits at his desk in his cozy bedroom. The walls are adorned with sketches of animals and plants, showcasing Charles' budding talent. Sunlight streams through the window, casting a warm glow on his eager face. The room is filled with books, their pages worn from countless readings. Charles flips through a beautifully illustrated volume on nature, his eyes wide with wonder.
NARRATOR (V.O.)Young Charles Darwin, fascinated by the world around him...
Charles pauses as he comes across a captivating illustration of a bird in mid-flight. His gaze shifts to the window, where a real bird soars gracefully across the sky. His imagination takes flight with it.
CHARLES(murmuring)To be able to soar through the air, to see the world from such heights...
FADE TO:
Scene 3. INT. DARWIN HOME - STUDY - DAY
Charles' father, ROBERT DARWIN, 50, a man of firm demeanor, enters the study. The room is filled with shelves lined with books, scientific instruments, and maps. Robert's eyes narrow disapprovingly as he sees Charles engrossed in his studies.
ROBERT(sternly)Charles, you need to focus on your studies. This fascination with nature is nothing but a distraction.
Charles quickly closes the book, his excitement dampened by his father's disapproval. He looks down, hiding his disappointment.
CHARLES(softly)But Father, the wonders of nature inspire me. There is so much to learn and explore.
Robert paces the room, a mix of concern and frustration on his face.
ROBERT(exasperated)Charles, the world requires men of science, men who can contribute to society's progress. What will you achieve by chasing after birds and bugs?
Charles gathers his courage, his voice filled with determination.
CHARLES(earnestly)Father, nature holds the answers to questions we haven't even thought to ask. I believe that understanding the natural world is the key to unlocking new discoveries and shaping the future.
Robert studies his son, a flicker of understanding crossing his face.
ROBERT(slightly softened)I want you to succeed, Charles. But promise me that you won't neglect your other studies. Balance is essential.
Charles nods, a spark of gratitude in his eyes.
CHARLES(resolute)I promise, Father. I will devote myself to my studies, but I won't abandon my passion for nature. I will find a way to merge the two.
Robert's stern expression softens, and he places a hand on Charles' shoulder.
ROBERT(sincerely)You have a unique mind, Charles. Don't let anyone extinguish your thirst for knowledge.
They share a meaningful look, a silent understanding passing between father and son.
FADE OUT.
Please note that this expanded version further delves into the scenic descriptions, character emotions, and philosophical discussions, allowing for a deeper exploration of Charles' passion and the complexities of his relationship with his father.
[image error][image error]Rewrite it (the script/screenplay), in the style of a Stanley Kubrick movie, like say`Barry Lyndon', and `Napoleon'. Like Kubrick conceived and wrote the script. ChatGPTFADE IN:
EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820
Superimpose: 1820, England
The vast English countryside stretches out before us, its rolling hills and endless fields suffused with a sublime beauty. Sunlight bathes the landscape, casting a soft golden glow upon the world. A sense of tranquility hangs in the air, broken only by the distant sounds of children's laughter and the rhythmic hum of labor. Nature, in all its splendor, becomes the canvas on which this tale unfolds.
NARRATOR (V.O.)England, 1820. A realm caught between tradition and transformation, where the majesty of nature intertwines with the seeds of scientific inquiry...
FADE TO:
INT. DARWIN HOME - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAY
A modest room suffused with a gentle aura. Books overflow from shelves, covering every available surface. The air is thick with the scent of knowledge and ambition. Young CHARLES DARWIN, 12, sits hunched over a desk, his eyes alight with intellectual hunger. The room is alive with a sense of both curiosity and foreboding.
NARRATOR (V.O.)Charles Darwin, a solitary seeker in a world brimming with questions, finds solace amidst the pages of nature's tome...
Charles, his gaze fixed on a beautifully illustrated book, discovers a universe within its pages. The walls recede, and he is transported into a realm where plants bloom and creatures soar. It is a place of discovery, a sanctuary where his soul finds respite.
FADE TO:
INT. DARWIN HOME - STUDY - DAY
A study bathed in shadows, meticulously organized, yet permeated with an aura of rigid authority. ROBERT DARWIN, 50, a man of commanding presence, stands before a desk, his eyes filled with a mixture of disappointment and concern. The air hangs heavy with unspoken expectations and unfulfilled dreams.
ROBERT(gravely)Charles, you mustn't let your mind wander amongst the whims of nature. There are greater paths to tread, paths that lead to legacy and honor.
Charles, his youthful features etched with both defiance and longing, stands before his father, their eyes locked in a silent battle of wills.
CHARLES(quietly, yet resolute)Father, nature holds the keys to our understanding, to the very fabric of existence. To ignore it is to deny our own potential.
A palpable tension fills the room as their words hang in the air, like a question left unanswered. In that moment, father and son become symbols of a world at odds with itself, the clash between duty and passion reverberating through the generations.
ROBERT(capturing his son's gaze)Balance, Charles. The key lies in striking a balance between the allure of the natural world and the structured realms of academia. Only then shall your journey be true.
Charles, a spark of fire igniting within his eyes, nods in understanding. The seeds of rebellion and the yearning for knowledge intertwine within him, propelling him towards a destiny yet untold.
FADE OUT.
Please note that this revised version attempts to capture the essence of Stanley Kubrick's storytelling style, characterized by his meticulous attention to detail, atmospheric visuals, and the exploration of complex themes through the interactions of characters.
[image error][image error]Now rewrite it like a Tarantino film.ChatGPTINT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820
Superimpose: 1820, England
A sweeping shot captures the breathtaking beauty of the English countryside. Rolling hills and vibrant green fields stretch out endlessly, painted with the brushstrokes of nature's perfection. Birds chirp, their melodies blending with the rustling leaves. It's an idyllic scene, seemingly peaceful, but beneath the surface, a revolution is brewing.
NARRATOR (V.O.)England, 1820. A time of quiet rebellion, where the natural world holds secrets waiting to be unraveled...
INT. DARWIN HOME - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAY
Charles Darwin, a young man with a spark in his eyes, sits amidst the chaos of his room. Books cover every inch of space, scattered pages and sketches strewn across the floor. He's a whirlwind of curiosity, a seeker of truth. His eyes light up as he flips through a magnificent book on nature, each page a gateway to new possibilities.
NARRATOR (V.O.)In a world governed by tradition, Charles Darwin dances on the edge of a precipice, yearning for knowledge that defies boundaries...
Charles spots movement outside the window, a bird soaring through the sky. His face illuminates with wonder, as if witnessing a miracle. He can almost taste the freedom, the untamed spirit of nature calling to him.
INT. DARWIN HOME - STUDY - DAY
Robert Darwin, a stern and formidable figure, stands tall behind his desk. The study is adorned with relics of a bygone era, maps charting unexplored territories and books filled with forgotten wisdom. He casts a disapproving gaze upon his son, Charles, who stands before him, his eyes burning with an unwavering passion.
ROBERT(bitingly)Charles, you're wasting your potential with this fascination for nature. We are men of science, not dreamers lost in the wild.
Charles straightens his back, a flicker of defiance in his voice.
CHARLES(intensely)But, Father, the natural world holds the key to the mysteries of existence. It's not just about discovery; it's about understanding our place in the universe.
Robert's face tightens, caught between the weight of tradition and the fire of his son's conviction.
ROBERT(through gritted teeth)Your obsession with nature will lead you astray. Focus on the path that guarantees success, or you'll become nothing more than a forgotten footnote in history.
Charles stares into his father's eyes, a resolve hardening within him.
CHARLES(firmly)I refuse to be a slave to the status quo. Nature beckons me, and I will answer its call. My journey will be one of revolution, where the boundaries of knowledge are shattered.
They stand in the room, a battle of wills raging between them, their words echoing in the air like gunshots, setting the stage for a clash of ideologies.
FADE OUT.
Please note that this revised version captures the spirit of Quentin Tarantino's storytelling style, characterized by intense dialogue, passionate characters, and a sense of rebellion against established norms.
[image error][image error]Rewrite it like a Woody Allen filmChatGPTINT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820
Superimpose: 1820, England
The English countryside unveils its tranquil charm. Rolling hills, bathed in warm sunlight, stretch as far as the eye can see. Delicate wildflowers sway in a gentle breeze, whispering secrets to the wind. Birds sing a melodic symphony, harmonizing with the rhythm of life. It's a place where nature's beauty weaves its spell, captivating all who venture into its embrace.
NARRATOR (V.O.)England, 1820. A land caught between tradition and curiosity, where the wonders of nature beckon even the most reserved souls...
INT. DARWIN HOME - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAY
Charles Darwin, a young man with a spark of curiosity in his eyes, sits amidst a room filled with scattered books and half-finished sketches. His face lights up with childlike wonder as he flips through a beautifully illustrated book on nature. Each page unveils a world of enchantment, a gateway to infinite possibilities.
NARRATOR (V.O.)In the heart of England's quiet countryside, Charles Darwin finds solace in the embrace of nature's wonders...
Through the window, Charles catches sight of a bird soaring through the sky. His eyes follow its flight, a smile forming on his lips. The bird becomes a symbol of freedom, whispering secrets that stir his adventurous spirit.
INT. DARWIN HOME - STUDY - DAY
Robert Darwin, a distinguished figure with a touch of skepticism in his eyes, stands beside a cluttered desk in his study. The room is adorned with dusty books, scientific instruments, and maps that hint at uncharted territories. He gazes at his son, Charles, who stands before him, a blend of determination and excitement in his demeanor.
ROBERT(slightly exasperated)Charles, my dear boy, you mustn't let this infatuation with nature consume you. There's a whole world waiting to be discovered through the realms of science and reason.
Charles meets his father's gaze, his voice filled with a mixture of passion and innocence.
CHARLES(enthusiastically)Father, nature is a symphony of marvels, a treasure trove of hidden knowledge. I yearn to explore its secrets, to embrace the mysteries that lie beyond our understanding.
Robert's expression softens, his love for his son shining through his eyes.
ROBERT(sighs)Charles, my only concern is your happiness and success. Pursue your passions, but remember to balance them with a practical approach to life. The world can be both wondrous and unforgiving.
Charles nods, his spirit undeterred, as he finds solace in his father's support.
CHARLES(optimistically)I promise, Father, to embark on this journey with an open heart and an inquisitive mind. Nature will guide me, but I won't lose sight of the path that leads to fulfillment.
They share a heartfelt moment, the bonds of family and shared dreams intertwining in the air.
FADE OUT.
Please note that this revised version captures the essence of Woody Allen's filmmaking style, characterized by witty dialogue, introspective characters, and a touch of optimism even in the face of uncertainty.
[image error][image error]Rewrite it like a Charlie Kaufman filmChatGPTINT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820
Superimpose: 1820, England
The English countryside stretches before us, its beauty tinged with a sense of mystery and existential wonder. Rolling hills and verdant fields pulse with an ethereal energy. Sunlight dances through the trees, casting enigmatic shadows. Nature, a canvas of enigma, invites contemplation and introspection.
NARRATOR (V.O.)England, 1820. A world where the boundaries of reality blur, where the forces of nature echo the intricacies of the human psyche...
INT. DARWIN HOME - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAY
Charles Darwin, an enigmatic figure with a mind as vast as the universe, sits amidst a room filled with scattered books and sketches. His face bears a mixture of fascination and melancholy as he delves into a book on nature, the pages brimming with both clarity and uncertainty. He searches for answers to questions he can't fully articulate.
NARRATOR (V.O.)In the depths of his solitary existence, Charles Darwin confronts the enigma of existence itself...
Through the window, Charles glimpses a bird soaring across the sky. Its flight becomes a metaphor for his own journey, a reminder of the boundless possibilities that lie beyond his grasp.
INT. DARWIN HOME - STUDY - DAY
Robert Darwin, a figure of authority struggling with his own doubts, stands in a study adorned with relics of forgotten wisdom. The room is a labyrinth of conflicting ideas and unspoken desires. He gazes at his son, Charles, who stands before him, a portrait of vulnerability and longing.
ROBERT(weary yet contemplative)Charles, your preoccupation with nature is admirable, but we must also reckon with the complexities of the human experience. Life's mysteries lie not only in the external world but within ourselves.
Charles meets his father's gaze, a kaleidoscope of emotions playing across his face.
CHARLES(whispering, lost in thought)Father, nature is a mirror reflecting our own existence. By unraveling its secrets, we may glimpse the profound truths that reside within.
Robert's stern facade cracks, revealing a glimpse of shared vulnerability.
ROBERT(softly, searching for words)Charles, my dear boy, the path you choose is your own, as are the answers you seek. Embrace the unknown, but remember to confront the shadows within.
Charles nods, a profound sense of longing and acceptance emanating from his very being.
CHARLES(resolutely)I will wander through the realms of nature, both external and internal. In this pursuit, I hope to uncover fragments of truth and maybe, just maybe, find solace in the chaos of existence.
They stand in the study, two souls navigating the enigma of life, their shared journey unfolding in enigmatic splendor.
FADE OUT.
Please note that this revised version captures the essence of Charlie Kaufman's distinctive filmmaking style, characterized by introspection, existential themes, and an exploration of the human psyche.
[image error][image error]Rewrite it like a Monty Python film.ChatGPTINT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820
Superimpose: 1820, England
The English countryside bursts into view with a burst of silly animations. Quirky animated animals dance across the landscape, while giant feet stomp through fields of exaggeratedly tall grass. The sun wears a top hat and winks mischievously. It's a world where absurdity reigns supreme, where the laws of logic take a backseat to hilarity.
NARRATOR (V.O.)England, 1820. A land of pure nonsense, where the ordinary becomes extraordinary and the ludicrous rules the day...
INT. DARWIN HOME - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAY
Charles Darwin, an eccentric figure with a twinkle in his eye, sits amidst a room filled with books stacked haphazardly. His face is a portrait of curiosity and infectious laughter as he flips through a pop-up book on nature. Every page reveals a zany surprise, from squirrels juggling acorns to talking trees with questionable fashion sense.
NARRATOR (V.O.)In the realm of utter silliness, Charles Darwin embarks on an extraordinary adventure through the world of nature...
Through the window, Charles spots a bird wearing a monocle and a top hat, gracefully floating through the sky. It squawks in a British accent, regaling him with pun-filled jokes and whimsical anecdotes.
INT. DARWIN HOME - STUDY - DAY
Robert Darwin, a prim and proper gentleman with a stiff upper lip, stands in a study adorned with peculiar artifacts. A stuffed rabbit in a bowler hat sits atop a shelf, while a painting of a fish playing a kazoo hangs crookedly on the wall. He gazes at his son, Charles, who stands before him, a comically oversized magnifying glass in hand.
ROBERT(with exaggerated seriousness)Charles, my boy, your obsession with nature is as absurd as a fish playing a musical instrument. There are more important matters to attend to!
Charles pulls out a banana from his pocket and brandishes it like a sword, a mischievous glint in his eyes.
CHARLES(with gusto)Father, nature is a never-ending source of laughter and surprises. It's a jolly good show, a grand spectacle of comic proportions!
Robert's stern demeanor cracks, and a stifled giggle escapes his lips.
ROBERT(reluctantly amused)Charles, you have a point. Life is too short not to embrace the absurdity that surrounds us. Carry on, my son, and bring a bit of joy to the world.
Charles does a silly dance, twirling and hopping around the room, while Robert attempts to imitate him, albeit with a touch less grace.
FADE OUT.
Please note that this revised version captures the spirit of Monty Python's irreverent humor and absurdity, characterized by silly animations, comedic wordplay, and playful performances.
...An interesting Case Study of Generative AI in action.
Conclusion: I don't think humanimal screenwriters are out of a job just yet.
& FYI
...Here's how I'd (possibly, probably, and maybe) write those 3 scenes:
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`CHARLES DARWIN BIOPIC', First 3 Scenes
FADE IN:
EXT. EARTH, IN SPACE
Earth spins, in space. ZOOM IN on: the UK.
ZOOM IN further on: England.
ZOOM IN on: London.
EXT. LONDON CITYSCAPE – 1820
Industrial factories, hansom cabs, British society goes about its business. Chimneysweeps at work.
Super:1820 England
ZOOM out into -- the nearby English countryside.
EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY - 1820
Rolling hills and green fields. People till the fields.
We ZOOM OVER to: RobertDarwin’s country manor.
And we ZOOM inside it:
INT. ROBERT DARWIN’S MEDICAL PRACTICE STUDY - DAY
Country Doctor Robert Darwin (50s, portly, in a suit) examines a refined genteel British GENTLEMAN (also 50s).
The Gentleman sits nervously on the doctor’s bed.
Robert taps his knee with a little doctor's knee-tapping-hammer.
GENTLEMAN
OW-!!
ROBERT
...Feltthat, eh-?
The annoyed gentleman rubs his sore knee.
GENTLEMAN
YES-!
ROBERT
Good-o. That’llbe fifty pounds - pay my
secretaryon the way out.
CAMERA PASSES through a wall:
INT. ROBERT DARWIN HOMESTEAD - CHARLES' BEDROOM - DAY
Books everywhere. Young CHARLES DARWIN (12, precocious,probably a future scientific genius or something) sits hunched over a desk, drawing a funny drawing of: ...himself, shooting a rat.
Charles now sits back, impressed with his work.
Robert Darwin enters, scowls, and picks up the drawn picture.
ROBERT
My boy, this isunacceptable! All you ever care about is: hunting, shooting, and rat-catching.
CHARLES
True.But, it has to be at the same time.
ROBERT
Why don’t you become ascientist like your
Grandfather - and, dosomething useful. Like,
solve Evolution, or, whatever.
Charles snatches the drawing back, and tosses it in the bin.
CHARLES
All right- I will.
Charles stands, marches to the door, puts on his hat, and strides out, now filled with purpose and meaning. Finally, a worthwhile problem to solve.
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[TOBE CONTINUED,
...PROBABLY ?,
BUT I DOUBT IT,
AS,
I ALREADY WROTE:
A PLAY & AN AWARD-WINNING MOVIE, ABOUT DARWIN]
~Velikovsky of Newcastle
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