themadeshop:I thought this might make a really great chorus to...

themadeshop:

I thought this might make a really great chorus to a song, or else a tiny story. So it’s here on hitRECord for remixing.

(I picture it repeated with long gaps between lines, so the meaning changes each time more is added to the phrase — starting negative, moving to ambivalent, getting nearly nihilistic, but then ending with the hint of redemption. (e.g. “I’m tired.” I’m tired of being tired.” I’m tired of being tired of being tired.” “I’m tired of being tired of being tired of being.”))