Preparing For Battle

I don't really know what to make of this. It reads like a critique of a fight.

Lauren/Dana

B slap ????

Back heel
Don't move on pom. punch
Exp. knee
Hair pull
Tudde?
Getting into pinto?

Eric/Noah

Hi 4's
Weird roll on hands
sped up last phase sloppy
Dr. Saim a mess

Reed/Phil

1st knees exposed
nice b'slaps r'house
P- active hand
messy pinto?
Beautiful patinavdo ??

By the way, I darkened the image so you could read the handwriting a bit better. The paper is just plain white.

Found in "Bloodline" by Kate Cary. Published by Razorbill/Penguin, 2005.

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