Not as good as I’d hoped… 363 keepers… and now done with the first third of the book

I hit words from the earlier version today… and did not delete them, because I didn’t want to come out heavily in the negative numbers.

The EXPOSITORY LUMP I discovered is marked, and all those words will go, but not today. I’ll cut them once I hit the end of the book.

I did pull out some before I got to the end of the days work, though, so I’m only showing 363 for the day.

However, my MC is now heading into terrible peril, stepping into darkness knowing as she does that there’s stuff in there that’s hungry and waiting, and that her chance of saving what she hopes to save is almost nonexistent.

(I’m going to have a lot of fun writing tomorrow).