Pithy. Pithy. Pithy! (am so eager for more of it …)

 

Sandra Neily here:

Are you, like me, pining for the world to get a bit more … Pithy?

A pithy phrase or statement is brief but full of substance and meaning. It often feels like a shot of truth.

(I don’t mean a hit of social media that assumes humans’ attention spans are shorter than a cream shot hitting expresso.)

Can a fiction writer be pithy? Use the pithy phrase successfully and not lose readers? Avoid that moment when readers feel an author reaching through to lecture … or (I’m cringing) hector them?

Wow them with that arresting moment that might define a character and have us thinking about a possible truth long after a page is turned?

Yes! Of course. But, like me, it might be surprising.

I’ve been listening to Agatha Christie’s short stories as I drive. The pithy is jumping out at me in the midst of bodies and more bodies, and even more bodies (and lots of stolen jewels).

So here she is.

 

  From Agatha Christie’s fiction:

I do not argue with obstinate men. I act in spite of them.” Agatha Christie, The Mystery of the Blue Train

“A mother’s love for her child is like nothing else in the world. It knows no law, no pity. It dares all things and crushes down remorseless.” Agatha Christie, The Hound of Death and Other Stories

“As a matter of fact it wouldn’t be safe to tell any man the truth about his wife! Funnily enough, I’d trust most women with the truth about their husbands. Women can accept the fact that a man is a rotter, a swindler, a drug taker, a confirmed liar, and a general swine, without batting an eyelash, and without its impairing their affection for the brute in the least. Women are wonderful realists.” Agatha Christie, Murder in Mesopotamia

“If you confront anyone who has lied with the truth, he will usually admit it – often out of sheer surprise. It is only necessary to guess right to produce your effect.” Agatha Christie, Murder on the Orient Express

“Everybody always knows something,” said Adam, “even if it’s something they don’t know they know.” Agatha Christie, Cat Among the Pigeons

And a few more from J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter novels:

If you want to know what a man’s like, take a good look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals.” Sirius Black, The Goblet of Fire

Words are, in my not-so-humble opinion, our most inexhaustible source of magic. Capable of both inflicting injury and remedying it.” Dumbledore, Deathly Hallows: part 2“It is our choices, Harry, that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities.” Dumbledore, Chanmber of Secrets.What’s comin’ will come, an’ we’ll meet it when it does.” Hagrid, The Goblet of Fire*********

I went back to look for pithy, truth-sounding moments in my novels and found them, but I think they should be Agatha-short. Or shorter. I thank her for being a pithy role model!

From my Deadly Trespass:

“… wild animal health depends on our setting up the outdoors as a zoo—a zoo without bars. I know it’s a contradiction, but today no animal can be free until we accept responsibility for its freedom.” (Patton)

It helped that I knew real conservation started in the human heart, not out where animals actually lived.

I replayed my mother’s message three times just to hear her voice, because a mother’s voice is a mother’s voice no matter what.

From my Deadly Turn:

I thought I might understand his caution—his hard-learned silence. Sometimes I thought there was a whole tribe of men who’d forced women onto smaller, meaner plots of ground where we were also supposed to be content and silent. I knew the scale of intimidation was different, even if the pain was real for both of us. My relatives had never been hunted down and slaughtered …

[about moose] “Maintaining the fiction that they are usually solitary and hard to locate in winter may save them from becoming easy targets. Remote locations often seduce lawful people into criminal behavior.”

…  the girl-be-silent disease. It was often a secret disease—not visible as it worked its way through our deepest selves. After enough messages telling us we weren’t acceptable, we took over the infection process. We helped the disease metastasize to our brains so no one had to remind us that our words and voices needed careful pruning to get and hold jobs—get and hold most men we met. We carried scalpels inside to accomplish our own voice reduction surgery.

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A fav pithy of mine: The president of the U.S. Senate thought he’d insult Senator Elizabeth Warren by saying this as he tried to gavel her down. Nope! The phrase was immediately seen as a compliment and went viral. My mug arrived the next day.

Please, while enjoying your cocoa, send me a comment with a favorite pithy phrase, either yours or a favorite of yours! Thanks….

The second Mystery in Maine, Deadly Turn, was published in 2021. Her debut novel, “Deadly Trespass, A Mystery in Maine,” won a national Mystery Writers of America award, was a finalist in the Women’s Fiction Writers Association “Rising Star” contest, and was a finalist for a Maine Literary Award. Find her novels at all Shermans Books (Maine) and on Amazon. Find more info on Sandy’s website.