WIP Wednesday: Getting My Hands Dirty

Loathsome has some kinks, but I'm rolling up my sleeves and pushing my fingers into the mud. It's a helluva lot of fun right now. I just edited the first big attack from the Ruined Men. Good stuff.

I like this excerpt because it reveals a little about some of my characters (before the attack, they've just found a body on the beach with its throat torn out):

"Oh?" I pushed the brass gadget into my pocket. "We have what choice, Mr. Olson?"

Olson looked down the line at each man in...