Saturday Snippet – Emotional Scene

Happy Saturday!


Today's theme is emotion, one of many critical aspects that make up each book. However, finding the right balance is individual to each story. For this snippet I have chosen an excerpt from Power Play which is probably one of the most intensely emotional stories I've written. The scene below is right after Jennifer has run from the hero. Intimacy is not her strong suit and she's really struggling with the torrent of emotions he creates in her.


Power Play has recently hit the Kindle erotica best seller list and I owe a big thanks to the readers for putting it there. Thank you!


Enjoy!


Snippet:


Jennifer stood at her car door, legs trembling and hands shaking. She needed to get in her car and drive far away from here as fast as possible. When Daegan discovered her gone, he was not going to be happy. He'd probably come looking for her, and she couldn't face him now. Unfortunately, her body was being uncooperative. With her key at the ready, she reached for the lock, and her hand shook harder. Tears streamed down her cheeks and into her mouth and none of it mattered.


She'd run. She'd done exactly what he said she would. Her head buzzed with the words he'd spoken the night before. Disappointment slashed deep.


So what. She didn't owe him a thing. She'd agreed to his offer in the heat of the moment before she'd had time to think about it. It wasn't like her to make spur-of-the-moment decisions. Over the years, she'd learned to carefully consider all of her options and not rush into anything with the potential to backfire on her. Jennifer laughed through the tears. What a joke. She was like her mother always said. Fickle.


"One minute you want one thing, and the next it's something else. Which one is it, Jennifer?"


She heard her mother's voice in her head as if it'd been yesterday, not a decade ago. How long had it been since she'd talked to her mother? A sob sounded in her throat. She had to get out of there before someone found her like this. She tried again to put the key in the lock, and the keys slipped from her hand.


"Fuck!"


Jennifer slid to the ground and plopped on her butt. She couldn't drive across town like this. Maybe she could hide in the studio until she got herself under control. Yeah right. The minute Daegan found her car in the parking lot, the first place he'd look was the stupid studio. Thanks to his role as contractor, he had access to the entire building. There was nowhere for her to go. With trembling hands she fished her cell phone out of her purse and turned it on.


Who are you going to call?


She had no one. Story of her fucked-up life. For now her life consisted of her career. Friends were hard to come by, but she kind of had a few. She considered Chase and Murphy her friends, even if they'd betrayed her with that asshole and allowed him to say she couldn't work. Jennifer swiped at the tears that continued to flow. There'd be no talking to them. She'd watched them interact with Eve when they didn't realize she was looking. Her friend submitted to them on a level she couldn't comprehend. No matter what they asked for, she gave willingly. And with a smile on her face. Hell, the woman practically glowed.


Eve. That's it. She jerked open the cell phone and dialed the number she knew by heart before she had a chance to change her mind.


On the fourth ring, Jennifer's hope wilted. Not available. Then Eve answered.


"It's-a-Jennifer," she spat, knowing there was no way to hide her distress.


"What's wrong? Are you all right? You sound like you're crying."


Regret lanced through Jennifer. This was a dumb idea. She began to pull the phone away from her ear and disconnect.


"Don't you dare hang up on me, young lady. Where are you?" The demand in Eve's voice startled her. She'd never heard the other woman talk like that before.


"Downstairs," she whispered.


"Good, don't move. Seriously, if you don't wait for me, I'll have Murphy track you down and whip your hide. You know he'll do it."


Jennifer nodded her head and felt a ghost of a smile cross her face. "Okay," she mumbled. "I'm in the parking lot." She folded the phone and pushed it into her pocket. She had about two minutes before Eve found her, and she didn't know what to do. There'd be no hiding the tears or getting cleaned up. With one last glance at her car and her only chance for escape, she turned and shuffled back toward the building.


Eve burst through the door, and all the emotion inside Jennifer boiled over. "I tried to run," she blurted.


Her friend wrapped her arms around her. "Of course you did, sweetie."


She held up her shaking hands. "Fingers wouldn't work. Can barely hold the keys." She knew the words tumbling from her mouth made little sense, but they were the best she could do at the moment.


"Come back inside, and you can tell me what happened." Eve ushered her through the front door and steered her in the direction of the studio. "In here." She pointed to Chase's private office, and Jennifer hesitated.


"Don't worry. Chase and Murphy aren't here."


"But Daegan—"


"Won't dare come in here without an invitation. Trust me."


Trust her. Eve had no idea how foreign those words were to her. And what the hell was up with everyone today pushing her to trust them?


 


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