King of Thorns stuff (v & vi)
part (v) here
& Gorgoth's pre-chapter snippet:
Gorgoth
Gorgoth is like no other. There is no mould for the leucrota. Twisted by the Builders’ poisons they fall broken from the womb and follow strange paths as they grow. The ribs that pierce his flesh and reach from each side are black and thick, his hide more red than blood, and the muscle beneath surges as he moves. And though he is shaped for war and for horror, there are few men in Adam’s image whose approval would mean as much to me – and most of them lie dead.
& Gorgoth's pre-chapter snippet:
Gorgoth
Gorgoth is like no other. There is no mould for the leucrota. Twisted by the Builders’ poisons they fall broken from the womb and follow strange paths as they grow. The ribs that pierce his flesh and reach from each side are black and thick, his hide more red than blood, and the muscle beneath surges as he moves. And though he is shaped for war and for horror, there are few men in Adam’s image whose approval would mean as much to me – and most of them lie dead.
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Apr 03, 2012 07:53PM
Well done sir. I can't wait to read the next installment. As a writer it takes a lot to keep me in a book. My wife laughs because I rarely get through a couple of chapters before dumping the book and heading back to my word processor. I read yours cover to cover.
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Greg wrote: "Well done sir. I can't wait to read the next installment. As a writer it takes a lot to keep me in a book. My wife laughs because I rarely get through a couple of chapters before dumping the book a..."Always good to hear! Many thanks & good luck with your own work.
