What Editing Looks Like: Example from The Kheld King

Just for yucks and giggles, I'm going to show how the process of editing looks and feels to the author. I will use an example from ,The Kheld King, which is being released in September. And which I just finished editing. Yippee!

The author finishes a book and it is good. A hell of a fine story.

Full of pride, the author sends the story to their publisher. Here it is! Let's publish it and let the readers have their fun (because I, the author, already had mine--just look at this great book!) Th...