The Greatest Risk- Chapter 2

“I am not at all in a humor for writing; I must write on until I am.”

~Jane Austen

So here we are again, readers. Another day, another chapter. Once again, here is 2nd chapter of my work in progress, The Greatest Risk. I’ve thought about your comments and they’ve really helped me identify some weaknesses in the writing. Granted, the story is still unedited, but I’ve just surpassed a huge ‘speed bump’ in chapter 5!

I will say, my goal of August 1st might have been a little aggressive, but I’m st...