Author Commentary on the Ending of the Alex Verus Series

(Note:  As with the main Author Commentary series, this is a master post that functions as an index.  Scroll down for the links to each individual post.)

I’m writing this in July 2022.  The first book of my new series has been finished and sent off to my publisher, and I’ll be starting Book 2 soon, but right now I’ve got a little bit of free time, so I thought I’d write a collection of posts about how I ended the Alex Verus series.  

This series will be divided into two halves.  In the second half, I’ll talk about the two alternate endings I considered for the series, and why I rejected them.  But before I can do that, I’ll have to explain what I was judging those endings on.  Which brings us to the subject of . . .

Good Endings and Bad Endings

Everyone knows that a good ending to a story is important.  But what makes an ending good?

The easy answer is to point to things that make for a good book in general – strong characters or good writing or a well-crafted plot – but those aren’t really features of an ending, they’re features of a book as a whole.  When you say that a book has a good or bad ending, you’re generally talking about how well the ending works as an ending, and that’s mostly unrelated to the book’s overall quality.  A book can be beautifully written and have compelling characters but still end in a totally unsatisfying way.  Which brings us back to the first question:  what makes an ending good?

This isn’t a subject I see people talk about very much, but it’s one I’m interested in, and it’s something I’ve worked out my own ideas about.  In my opinion, there are two things that make an ending good or bad:  consistency, and theme. 

I’ll talk about these two things in the next two posts in the series.  After that, I’ll jump into the alternate endings.  

Series Index:

On The Subject Of Endings (this post)Consistency:  How Well The Pieces FitTheme:  The Message You’re SendingAlex Verus Alternate Ending 1:  Total VictoryWhy I Didn’t Choose the “Total Victory” EndingAlex Verus Alternate Ending 2:  Bad Things HappenWhy I Didn’t Choose the “Bad Things Happen” EndingConclusion
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Published on July 22, 2022 02:00
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message 1: by Ian (last edited Jul 24, 2022 05:50AM) (new)

Ian Mears Ending are tricky and often reader and author may have differing views on it. I’m pretty sure there have been many books where the author though the ending was good but the readers didn’t like it! I think an ending is more than just important, it’s the most crucial part of the book/series. Get it wrong and many won’t bother even starting a series if they hear the ending is rubbish, no matter how good the rest is.
Ultimately the reader needs to feel satisfied (happy or sad) and that the ending just feels right even if it isn’t always entirely consistent or matching a theme. I think you could have killed if Verus as it had been flagged for quite a while but if you had I don’t think you would have been very popular! After so many books and with a well developed character that people became attached to I think it would have left most unsatisfied if he’d died (and you with lots of angry emails 😄), even if it was logical. Sometimes as a reader you just want to come away feeling happy and are willing to overlook a little inconsistency - more so for a long series than a one off book 😊

P.S. Thanks for these posts, they are a fascinating ‘behind the scenes’ insight into the process of writing.


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