Second Draft Hell

When your redraft starts to resemble an instruction manual, it’s time to take a break. Structure is so tricky. It holds a story together, and propels it. It can help generate suspense and heighten emotion. It has so many important jobs to do, yet should be invisible, or at least unobtrusive, like the seams and darts that shape a beautiful dress. I’m working away revising my next novel, which will be the third in my trilogy of fairytale retellings, after Stepsister and Poisoned. And even though I’m ripping my hair out at the moment, I can’t wait to tell you about it. I’ve been spending my days with a whole new cast of characters, all of whom I’ve grown to love. Ok…most of whom I’ve grown to love. One of them…well, she eats love for breakfast. More to come on that soon! And in the meantime, back to Second Draft Hell!
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Published on June 15, 2022 09:55
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message 1: by Deanna (new)

Deanna Madden Love the term Second Draft Hell. Good luck at slogging through.


message 2: by Kimberly (new)

Kimberly I love how you compare a story's structure to the seams and darts that shape a beautiful dress - so true!!! I'm very excited to hear about your next novel! :-D Best wishes on the second draft. Please, take a break - you deserve one ;-)


message 3: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Donnelly Deanna wrote: "Love the term Second Draft Hell. Good luck at slogging through."

Thank you, Deanna - I'm getting there!


message 4: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Donnelly Kimberly wrote: "I love how you compare a story's structure to the seams and darts that shape a beautiful dress - so true!!! I'm very excited to hear about your next novel! :-D Best wishes on the second draft. Plea..."

Thank you so much, Kimberly! I'm so excited for this to get done, too - and for the one after that (and after that and after that) ... I just wish there were more of me so I get through this process a little faster!


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