Random Writing Tips – Love is weird

 I’min the process of revising a story about a guy whose fiancée dies.  The story covers from when he learns of herdeath to the funeral.  The writing groupI’m in critiqued the first draft, and one of them commented that they wanted toknow more about the relationship.  And Ihad realized that was something I had glossed over.  I think I just had one scene of himremembering how they met.  So I