Day 2,846: A Step

Made a step forward today on my troublesome scene! A good step, I think. We’ll see how it reads in the morning, but I think it may have been a genuine step forward. It involved dialing the scene down. I think I may have been forcing too much (unjustified) emotion into it, and I could simplify things.

The simplify bit was huge. I was also trying to accomplish too many things with the scene. A scene can only ever be about one thing. Sometimes, I can fudge with two things, but those are always m...