TFS3 Chapter 5

So, when I sat down to attempt writing for 24 hours (I wrote for about 18 hours), I tried using voice diction to give my hands a break.

Well, now I’m reading through to get back into the story so that I can finish writing and boy voice diction is not my friend. I can’t even continue writing until I’ve fixed these errors in this book. I’m not sure how the rest of it is, but I’m stuck on chapter 5. There’s parts where I don’t even know what I was trying to say.

Might be doing some rewriting now.

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