Role of Emotion in Master of Rods and Strings

I recently answered some questions about the role of emotion and revision regarding a scene in Master of Rods and Strings. I tried to answer without any huge spoilers. Also, a few sorts of "writer's context" questions. Didn't have all the photos ideally I would have liked to have had, but might be of interest nevertheless! Check it out, and thanks to Car (Chris) Cooper! [May take a couple tries to load in page btw]
http://chrisricecooper.com/259-inside...