Getting it Right or Making it Good

Getting it Right or Making it Good

My first critique group used to point out that just because something was “right” or “true” didn’t make it good. So, here’s a real life “yes, it happened” moment that wouldn’t pass muster in one of my books.

Many of you know I’m a stickler for having character names that are easily distinguished from one another. Not long ago, I was in the hospital for a minor procedure (I’m fine.). Upon arrival (after paying the copay), I was taken to a pre-op room by a nurse,...