Do your characters make you suffer from insomnia like author, Toby Neal?

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Welcome to my blog Toby. I loved your post about insomnia, and must say I have experienced it quite often myself. Mind you, I don't recall having to terrorize one of my poor characters into making them even crazier, but then again, maybe I should. It could add a new element to my one of my angel stories!!

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Toby Neal was raised on Kauai in Hawaii. She wrote and illustrated her first story at age 5 and has been published in magazines and won several writing contests. After initially majoring in Journalism, she eventually settled on mental health as a career and loves her work, saying, "I'm endlessly fascinated with people's stories." She enjoys many outdoor sports including bodyboarding, scuba diving, beach walking, gardening and hiking. She lives in Hawaii with her family and dogs. Toby credits her counseling background in adding depth to her characters–from the villains to Lei Texeira, the courageous and vulnerable heroine in the Lei Crime Series.




Last night I had insomnia. This is not allthat unusual; as a 'thinker' I am unduly burdened by brain processing, and I'dbeen knocked out all last week by a cold and resulting cold medicine, and lastnight was the first time I went to bed without chemical help. Even so I did anafternoon workout hoping to be too tired for the ol' sleeplessness to comeback.
Didn't work. At around 2 a.m. I woke up(unable to see clock without my glasses, and putting them on is admitting theinsomnia is really bad, so the time remains a fuzzy red figment in the dark)and was plagued by the sense that the bad guy in my sequel is just not scaryenough.
Creepy, yes. Disturbing. The potential fora great deal of gore is also there, which I've handled with buckets, tarps andscene cutaways (I tend to be of the suggestive rather than explicit school whenit comes to violence) and he's nicely crazed with a well developed pathology.Even so, he's just not 'popping' for me… and if it's not working for me it'sdefinitely not going to be working for readers.
So in my insomniac bed I thought of an oldstandby suspense technique—the ticking clock. I had it in there, but an earlydeath of the victim sort of killed it (ha! Pun!) and so today I did what I haveto do to keep track of time—printed out a calendar of the month, stretched outthe timeline and extended hope for the hopeless. I gave the victim a clearexpiration date that the reader knows and Detective Leilani Texeira doesn't,and had the guy who, in the original, lay in a coma and was peacefullyslaughtered, wake up and demand to know what the hell was going on.
And suddenly, the story's scary. Urgent. Adate at the top of each chapter begins a new day and reminds you the dude inthe cave is going to buy it if Lei doesn't get off her toned ass and out of thepool with the hot developer  and trackdown the madman.
Ifeel a heady power— I can manipulate time! I can bring back the dead, andinvent entire bureaucracies! I can just freakin' make stuff up, and when itdoesn't work, I can completely change it!
 Ilove being a writer. Even the insomnia—when it amounts to something useful.Unfortunately sometimes I forget the brilliant ideas I have in that effortlessgray between sleeping and awake.
Do you have insomnia? How do you handle it,and what usually brings it on?



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Torch Ginger, the sequel to Blood Orchids, will be released May 2012.

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