What's in a Name?
Author and writing consultant, Rick Shelton, made a statement at a recent workshop that has stuck with me. Although he was giving a Writing Workshop on how we as educators could better instruct children in the art of writing, his truths hit home with me as an author.
"A character should only have a name if he or she does something important in the story."
Hmm. After I thought about it, the statement was so obvious I had the urge to slap my hand against my forehead. After all, if the character is so minor he contributes little or nothing to the plot, why do we care about his name?
As readers of fiction, we want to connect with the characters in the story. One of the first ways anyone connects is by knowing another's name. Yet if I give a name to everyone in the story, it devalues the main characters, as well as disconnects the reader. Once a character is named, we automatically begin to picture that character in our mind. We try to form an opinion of that character. Are we going to like this person or not? How is he important to the plot? What is he going to do?
But if we name insignificant characters it becomes confusing to the reader. The reader asks herself, "Wait a minute. What happened to ---?"
Take for example the paraphrased beginning of a recent young author's short story:
Me and my friends, Mallory Grace and Susan and Emily and Emma Claire all went to the mall. Mallory Grace and I decided to get an ice cream. I got chocolate chip and Mallory Grace ordered a plain vanilla. While we were sitting in the food court enjoying our frozen treats we saw some cute boys.
Well, okay. Are you asking yourself where did Susan and Emily and Emma Claire go? Our writing consultant, Mr. Shelton, would advise that if they no longer appear in the story, then we don't need to know their names.
The young author could just as easily have begun with something like, I went to the mall with Mallory Grace and some friends.
Now, although the examples are elementary, the point is still valid. So consider, please, if it is truly important to give a name to the post man, the bus driver, and the sister's pet poodle. Unless they have more than a half-page part in the story, it's not impolite to allow them to remain nameless. If you found this hint helpful, you may want to read more from Rick Shelton at http://www.rickshelton.us/
Happy writing,

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Published on February 23, 2012 00:00
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