Is it the Beginning?
Is this an interesting enough beginning to a book to make you want to read more? I’d seriously like your input because I’m about to submit this book for consideration and am wondering (as I always do) if I’m starting at the right point in the story,,. From Royal Secrets or I might title it simply Forbidden. Which one?
As I spun Ingrid into the final turn of the waltz, I was thinking of the new American Embassy we’d finally won for my country. This morning, I was on the King’s righthand when he signed documents finalizing the long negotiations. I knew how much this meant to him because I am Crown Prince and Heir Apparent to the throne of Desjardins, a province-state in southern Europe, captured between the mountains and the sea. This embassy would create more financial strength and give us a stronger voice in world politics. My…
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