Pontypridd © J C Milne

This poem was written many years ago, so please forgive it any poetical failings! Bridges are so important.
I was going to add a photograph, but am never sure about copyright, and instead decided to include a reference to a picture by Dave Lewis, also from Pontypridd. Dave is a Goodreads author and the poem below was submitted last year to an annual competition he runs.
http://www.david-lewis.co.uk/wp-conte...

Pontypridd © J C Milne

Old Bridge; a child’s first peek at ages past,
a blindly savoured cherry to be sucked;
dear growing, then, by this old town, though
floods dismembered banks, stones, roads,
my Auntie Blod’s piano naked in the street;
and same old floods, in eons gone, swept
through our arch of soil, our lovely bow,
and rushed it down the Taff that raced below.
And when I learned a wooden bridge was raised,
in my head its splinters flew, the river sang:

My cup runs fast, and roaring through.
I joyouse on, while all these faces watch,
Who for my splendid show have laboured long,
Have cut and bent and joined their little bridge,
And watched it go, ripped in my surgent flow
.

Then in the wake of chaos flowed new arch of stone,
hollowed out to take the flood, and bless the vision
And the toil. This stone stood firm, shoulders now
New Bridge, offspring of the rib. Similarly stand,
Beside New Town with all its modern sheen,
Evan and his brother James, statued near,
Monuments for lovely Wales. Say with pride,
Ynysangharad, Pontypridd. In the saying, still
Slips the flood of ages through this sweet
Land of our fathers, hen wlad fy nadau,
Old in the blood, the birthplace of our song;
And ever, on land or stream, the foot and span.
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Published on April 07, 2021 04:11
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message 1: by Hanneke (new)

Hanneke Beautiful, Jeanne!


message 2: by J.C. (new)

J.C. Why, thank you, Hanneke! The town of my early years means a lot to me.


message 3: by Jola (new)

Jola Dear Jeanne,
The amount of my sheer awe is not a smidge,
I loved your poem about Pontypridd Bridge!

PS
Thanks for the link, the bridge in Pontypridd looks lovely and mysterious! No wonder it inspires stunning poems like yours.


message 5: by J.C. (new)

J.C. Thanks, Dave, for your helpful contribution.


message 6: by J.C. (new)

J.C. Jola wrote: "Dear Jeanne,
The amount of my sheer awe is not a smidge,
I loved your poem about Pontypridd Bridge!

PS
Thanks for the link, the bridge in Pontypridd looks lovely and mysterious! No wonder it inspi..."


An enchanting accolade, Jola, thank you - you brought a happy smile to my face!
Jeanne.


message 7: by Fionnuala (new)

Fionnuala Ah, I remember you saying on your 'Bridge over the River Drina' review that you'd written about Pontypridd bridge, Jeanne—and you have, most movingly. I love that the new bridge and the old 'shoulder' each other just as the two statues you mention must do also. I love too that you've given a voice to the river. That voice rings very true—I can hear it in the lovely word 'joyouse' that carries an echo of 'joyeuse' but has more than gaiety in it, it has power too, the power that can leave a piano 'naked in the street' and crush a bridge to kindling. So good!
Dave's photo is very vivid, by the way.


message 8: by J.C. (new)

J.C. Thank you so much, Fionnuala, your comments mean such a lot, and I'm glad to have Pontypridd better known, beyond South Wales. I have just left a comment on your own poem - your "Finnigan's Wake" review - so clever and such fun!


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