I’m feeling good for the first time in a few days so I’m gonna just go ahead and reveal...

I’m feeling good for the first time in a few days so I’m gonna just go ahead and reveal one of the mysteries of the universe to you:

How do you make your writing flow better?

It’s simple! Stop making your sentences juggle. 🤹‍♀️

In a novel, just like in a speech or a conversation, each sentence is a thought. Writing has good flow when it feels like the thoughts are chained together naturally. And, by extension, writing feels clunky when there’s too much going on in each sentence.

Example time!

“The su...