Habnab hooks

When pitching to an agent, you’ve only got one shot. Most agents don’t look any further than the opening line of a novel. So I’ve got to make that opening line as punchy as possible.

Here are my five best opening lines for Habnab.

Can you please vote for your favourite?

Thank you. I appreciate your time and your assistance.

And that’s where you come in.

Anonymous VoteSign in with WordPressBelow are five hooks for the upcoming novel Habnab. Which one is your favourite?Baby Bridie’s first night in her new bedroom at the top of Bamford Folly was not going well. The darkened fields of Ireland stretch to the cliffs above the Atlantic Ocean, each bound in stacked stones like an enormous chessboard.As Molly entered her sixth hour of pacing with her screaming baby, her thoughts kept returning to the stone they had removed from the standing stone circle three weeks ago.Up until this moment, Molly Bertolocci had lived her life with no regrets.Molly Bertolocci held her screaming baby as close as she could without deadening her ears and wished hard that the brat would just disappear.Vote