Chapter 1 of Out Of The Dark Posted

Updated version of Chapter One of Out Of The Dark. I felt like we needed to get to see an interaction between Decebel and Jen. So I added something at the end of the chapter that also helps transition to chapter 2 a little better. Enjoy!
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Published on February 17, 2012 09:45
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message 1: by Cheyenne (new)

Cheyenne I CANNOT wait for this book!


message 2: by Daphne (last edited Feb 17, 2012 12:22PM) (new)

Daphne (biting my nails) I'm so hyped! Gosh I love the picture of Decebel. Thank you for sharing and keeping us in anticipation.


message 3: by Francena (new)

Francena I want to know who rachel is!! The anticipation is killing me


message 4: by Mer (new)

Mer Well, that was a lot like taking a chocoholic to a chocolate store...letting them smell the deliciousness in the air and seeing all the goodness that surrounds them.....and then having to leave!!! Sigh....All signs point to another awesome read....how much longer do I have to wait??? I offer my services for arc if necessary!! I'm your girl!! Your wolf loving, chocolate eating girl!!


message 5: by Kim hurst (new)

Kim hurst OMG! part of chapter one is soo good! i wish i could read more of it!! keep the good work up! :)


message 6: by Andrea (new)

Andrea Eeeeek! I can't wait to read the whole book! Quinn, you are awesome! Keep em coming!


message 7: by Michele (last edited Feb 18, 2012 12:36PM) (new)

Michele Mer wrote: "Well, that was a lot like taking a chocoholic to a chocolate store...letting them smell the deliciousness in the air and seeing all the goodness that surrounds them.....and then having to leave!!! ..."

LOL, LOL, LOL. Perfect analogy and I whole-heartedly agree!


message 8: by Michele (new)

Michele Freaking Hilarious! Only Jen could respond like that! Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!


message 9: by Sam (new)

Sam the antipation is killing me. im soooo excited


message 10: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Cheyenne wrote: "I CANNOT wait for this book!"

Thank you Cheyenne! I'm so glad you are excited!


message 11: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Daphne wrote: "(biting my nails) I'm so hyped! Gosh I love the picture of Decebel. Thank you for sharing and keeping us in anticipation."

Hey Daphne, I really thought that pic of Dec was perfect. Hope you liked chapter 1. Thanks for reading.


message 12: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Francena wrote: "I want to know who rachel is!! The anticipation is killing me"

Rachel is the dormant that Cynthia read about to Vasile, Alina and Dec. thank you so much for reading my books!


message 13: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Mer wrote: "Well, that was a lot like taking a chocoholic to a chocolate store...letting them smell the deliciousness in the air and seeing all the goodness that surrounds them.....and then having to leave!!! ..."

That is awesome! So sorry to dangle such deliciousness in front of your nose.....but if I didn't I wouldn't be doing my job ;). I really appreciate you reading my books!


message 14: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Kim wrote: "OMG! part of chapter one is soo good! i wish i could read more of it!! keep the good work up! :)"

Thank you Kim! So glad that you liked it!


message 15: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Andrea wrote: "Eeeeek! I can't wait to read the whole book! Quinn, you are awesome! Keep em coming!"

Thank you Andrea! I really appreciate your kind words! I'm excited for you guys to get your hands on OOTD.


message 16: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Michele wrote: "Mer wrote: "Well, that was a lot like taking a chocoholic to a chocolate store...letting them smell the deliciousness in the air and seeing all the goodness that surrounds them.....and then having ..."

Thought that was awesome as well! Love Jen moments and that def was one.


message 17: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Sam wrote: "the antipation is killing me. im soooo excited"

Thank you Sam! I'm sorry you are having to wait but I'm so glad you like my books.


message 18: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 19, 2012 02:11PM) (new)

OMG to think you just released one book and your already got the first chapter for your next one! So excited! I still don't have just one drop yet...:( It's killing me

Oh and I have a question: Umm is Just One Drop going to be on itunes? because that's were I buy my books.

Thanks! Love your books
Sydney


message 19: by Rebecca (new)

Rebecca Such a wonderful series!


message 20: by Sam (new)

Sam omg i just finshed jod for the 300th time and read that chapter from out of the dark. :D im so glad i had no school today or id be working on some boring project. ahh how happy am i.


message 21: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Cheyenne wrote: "I CANNOT wait for this book!"

Thank you Cheyenne! I'm excited about it as well!


message 22: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Sydney wrote: "OMG to think you just released one book and your already got the first chapter for your next one! So excited! I still don't have just one drop yet...:( It's killing me

Oh and I have a question: Um..."


Hey Sydney! Thank you I really appreciate your support!! JOD will be on itunes. Smashwords has approved it so I'm thinking it will be on there by this weekend.


message 23: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Rebecca wrote: "Such a wonderful series!"

Thank you so much!!


message 24: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Sam wrote: "omg i just finshed jod for the 300th time and read that chapter from out of the dark. :D im so glad i had no school today or id be working on some boring project. ahh how happy am i."

Thank you Sam! I really appreciate you reading my books! and I'm so glad you liked OOTD Chapter 1!


message 25: by Sydney (new)

Sydney Proctor Omg I love the excerpt of ootd! I can't wait to read more! Ilove how even though Jen is injured she has time to talk and have a good laugh with Decebel.


message 26: by Rebecca (new)

Rebecca Francena wrote: "I want to know who rachel is!! The anticipation is killing me"

There is a brief back history as to who she is. I believe it's in the first book.


message 27: by Francena (new)

Francena Rebecca wrote: "Francena wrote: "I want to know who rachel is!! The anticipation is killing me"

There is a brief back history as to who she is. I believe it's in the first book."


Thank you, I really dont remember that part.. But I cant wait to finish the story


message 28: by Carissa (new)

Carissa Once I started, I just could NOT stop reading this series! I love the individuality of the characters and can't wait for the next installment! The excerpt made me even more excited and just anticipating the twists and turns that would come. Oooooh can't believe this series! It has been a while since I've enjoyed a book series so much! *goes back to rereading the other books again for the 100th time*


message 29: by Ashly (new)

Ashly HOLY CRAP BATMAN!! I CANNOT wait for this to come out!


message 30: by Marulett (new)

Marulett Quinn!!! OMG woman, seriously you can´t just give us one chapter...now I need the whole other chapters!! LOL

Like in my review of JOD, this is how I will feel until your next book...




message 31: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Sydney wrote: "Omg I love the excerpt of ootd! I can't wait to read more! Ilove how even though Jen is injured she has time to talk and have a good laugh with Decebel."

I just feel like Jen finds comfort in humor. It's her coping mechanism. Thank you for reading the excerpt and I am so glad you liked it!


message 32: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Carissa wrote: "Once I started, I just could NOT stop reading this series! I love the individuality of the characters and can't wait for the next installment! The excerpt made me even more excited and just anticip..."

I'm so glad you have enjoyed my books! I'm really excited about OOTD it's going to be more intense. But we all know Jen can take intense to a new level.


message 33: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Ashly wrote: "HOLY CRAP BATMAN!! I CANNOT wait for this to come out!"

Me too! Lol


message 34: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Marulett wrote: "Quinn!!! OMG woman, seriously you can´t just give us one chapter...now I need the whole other chapters!! LOL

Like in my review of JOD, this is how I will feel until your next book...

"

Thanks chick, I hate to leave you all dangling...sort of lol JK I'm excited for you to read OOTD. I really hope it's epic!


message 35: by Marulett (new)

Marulett Quinn wrote: "Marulett wrote: "Quinn!!! OMG woman, seriously you can´t just give us one chapter...now I need the whole other chapters!! LOL

Like in my review of JOD, this is how I will feel until your next book..."


I know it will be! I´m really looking forward to reading more about Dec & Jen!!


message 36: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine Finks OMG, that was amazing...I cannot wait for that book.


message 37: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Marulett wrote: "Quinn wrote: "Marulett wrote: "Quinn!!! OMG woman, seriously you can´t just give us one chapter...now I need the whole other chapters!! LOL

Like in my review of JOD, this is how I will feel until ..."

Thank you!


message 38: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Jasmine wrote: "OMG, that was amazing...I cannot wait for that book."

Thank you! So glad you liked it!


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinn wrote: "Sydney wrote: "OMG to think you just released one book and your already got the first chapter for your next one! So excited! I still don't have just one drop yet...:( It's killing me

Oh and I have..."

Yay! <3


message 40: by Sam (new)

Sam Marulett wrote: "Quinn!!! OMG woman, seriously you can´t just give us one chapter...now I need the whole other chapters!! LOL

Like in my review of JOD, this is how I will feel until your next book...

"


LMAO! That pic of stewie is hilarious! I know how u feel. I'm. In withdrawl.


message 41: by Marulett (new)

Marulett Hahahaha yes it is! Yep, we´re all in withdrawl :P


message 42: by Sam (new)

Sam Marulett wrote: "Hahahaha yes it is! Yep, we´re all in withdrawl :P"

I know right. My friends are as ready to throttle me as they are ready to sleep . I apparently obess. Hmm. Idk what their talking about


message 43: by Allison (new)

Allison Smith Marulett wrote: "Quinn!!! OMG woman, seriously you can´t just give us one chapter...now I need the whole other chapters!! LOL

Like in my review of JOD, this is how I will feel until your next book...

"


i agree with you on that one lolz


message 44: by Trinity (last edited Feb 26, 2012 02:12AM) (new)

Trinity Oh M Goodness I can't Waite for the full book first minuite it comes out for the Kindle Fire I'll buy it


message 45: by Autumn (new)

Autumn OH Quinn that was sooooo not fair!!! It will have to be re read over and over. Can't Wait for the next post!!!!


message 46: by Sam (new)

Sam Autumn wrote: "OH Quinn that was sooooo not fair!!! It will have to be re read over and over. Can't Wait for the next post!!!!"

i second that


message 47: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Trinity wrote: "Oh M Goodness I can't Waite for the full book first minuite it comes out for the Kindle Fire I'll buy it"

Thank you Trinity! So glad you liked them!


message 48: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Autumn wrote: "OH Quinn that was sooooo not fair!!! It will have to be re read over and over. Can't Wait for the next post!!!!"

Thank you Autumn! So glad that you liked them! Sorry to leave you guys hanging.


message 49: by Quinn (new)

Quinn Loftis Sam wrote: "Autumn wrote: "OH Quinn that was sooooo not fair!!! It will have to be re read over and over. Can't Wait for the next post!!!!"

i second that"


Thank you Sam!


message 50: by Carissa (new)

Carissa Quinn wrote: "Carissa wrote: "Once I started, I just could NOT stop reading this series! I love the individuality of the characters and can't wait for the next installment! The excerpt made me even more excited ..."

Now THAT I can imagine! Just think of all the endless possibilities Jenn would think up/come up with--- and try on poor B! He's right about one thing through and through, his life has just become quite interesting and will stay that way in which I hope OOTD will give even more a taste of :D On another note, I'm so curious as to how Jenn will exploit the mental link she has with B. Keep up the awesome work and let the Jenn vibes guide you! lol ^-^


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