1st Page Contest

Jamie Ayres is hosting a first-page contest on her blog, to be judged by author Heather Burch. Five random winners will receive a personal critique from Ms. Burch.

Following is the first page of my current Work-in-Progress.  

Wish me luck!

-Cheryl


Angela Beebe stared unseeingly into the closet and worried her bottom lip. It had been over a year since Scott's murder. Why did Detective Bauman want to meet with her again, he already had her testimony? There was nothing more to say. She flipped...