Poetry experiment with cinquains

A cinquain is 5 line poem with syllable counts of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2. So i gave it a try today let me know what you think.

Pandemic

face-masks,

social distance,

An airborne virus lingers.

My primal fear lives, masked by a

smile.

-Mandy Botlik 2021

Warming

New green

buds unfurling,

unseasonable, warm,

Squelching mud, jade January

greenhouse.

-Mandy Botlik 2021

What do you think? Any good? Thanks for reading.

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