WIP Diagnostic: Is This Working? A Closer Look at a Historical Short Story Opening

Critique By Maria D'Marco

WIP Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specific issues. Readers are encouraged to send in work with questions, and we diagnose it on the site. It’s part critique, part example, and designed to help the submitter as well as anyone else having a similar problem.

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This week’s question:

Does this opening work?

Market/Genre: Historical Short Story

On to the diagnosis…

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