maxkirin:I’ve been doing lots of editing, so here’s four of the many ways you can care for a bad...

maxkirin:

I’ve been doing lots of editing, so here’s four of the many ways you can care for a bad sentence! 🤓✨

TRIM - The easiest way to make a sentence feel a lot less clunky is to trim any unnecessary words. What are you really trying to say? There is a lot of flexibility with prose, and sometimes just removing one word is all you need. Trimming can also help remove ambiguity in your language.

SPLIT - Are you trying to shove too much into just one sentence? I know I’m guilty of that! I love my co...