Six Sentence Sunday: A Snippet from Forest Girl

For this week, I'm sharing a little piece of my very first novel, Forest Girl, which I am preparing for submission. In this story, my hero finds himself in an arranged marriage. This snippet comes from the wedding, when he first sets eyes on his wife-to-be:

The bride was young, early to mid-twenties at the most, and attractive. Strike that—she was beautiful. Under different circumstances he might have chosen her of his own accord. Her eyes met his briefly and she smiled a little shy smile that was cute in every way. Don't stare. He tore his eyes away from her.

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What do you think? Forest Girl is yet to be published, but if you want to try my work, you can check out Most Eligible Bachelor :

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(but remember that it's currently 15% off for the first 2 weeks at Evernight)

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