GRAMMATICAL CRIMES I HAVE COMMITTED: THE GRANDDADDY OF THEM ALL


One click of my computer’s mouse and I was headed toward disaster.
As I put the final touches on my inspirational thriller, "The Face Behind the Veil," and about to e-mail it to my publisher, I decided to change a character’s name from Joseph to Stanley.In an instant, this global change was made throughout the 600 page, three-part document, which traces the legend of the birth veil through three generations.
That was the only change I made after the book underwent extensive editing. Confident it was error-free, I clicked the mouse and off it went. It wasn’t long before I received the galley proof to review and approve, so the printing process could begin.
Weary of the seven-year project and the tedious historical research that had gone into it, I almost didn’t review the galley. But something in me couldn’t let it go until I did. That must have been Providential.  Imagine my surprise when I discovered how that last minute name change affected a scene where the Christmas story is told. In horror, I read the following.
"Now the birth of Jesus Christ was on this wise: When as his mother Marywas espoused to Stanley, before they came together, she was found withchild of the Holy Ghost. Then Stanley her husband, being a just man, andnot willing to make her a public example, was minded to put her awayprivily. But while he thought on these things, behold, the angel of the Lord appeared unto him in a dream, saying, Stanley, thou son of David,fear not to take unto thee Mary thy wife: for that which is conceived in her is of the Holy Ghost . . .. Then Stanley being raised from sleep did as the angel of the Lord had bidden him, and took unto him his wife:" (Matthew 1:18-20, 24).After getting over my initial shock, I made the necessary changes.
However, rather than globally, I did this the old-fashioned way, one at a time. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Flora invites you to look inside her books on Amazon. Published by MillerWords.
The face Behind the Veil: Historical Fiction 
https://www.amazon.com/Face-Behind-Veil-Flora-Reigada/dp/1418443646
The Castle in the Sun Series
Book 1: Love's Sweetest Revenge: Romantic-Suspense
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0785FWH5P/ref=cm_sw_r_tw_dp_U_x_WKI3EbXY53W5N
Book 2: Love's Sweetest Deliverance: Romantic-Suspense https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07BBFRHJT?
Where Your Heart Meets God's: Inspiration: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B077X37MVX/ref=cm_sw_r_tw_dp_U_x_9PI3Eb7NZF4TW?fbclid=IwAR0nd9Tmw-




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Ann Botnick Well thank goodness you caught it.


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