The Importance of Beta Readers

As previously announced, Bound was sent out for beta reading.  Feedback was received, and I am glad to have gotten it.  Here is some of the feedback received:

Rabin, is that the guy’s name? (I didn't mention it was Lt. Rabin until later)
If they put tape over her mouth, how was she begging for her life? This ended too abruptly.  That pisses me off.  If I bought this, that would probably keep me from buying the next one, unless maybe it was already available. You should not release th...