BALANCE OF NARRATIVE AND DIALOGUE

I posted about what too much dialogue one after another does to a page or worse—a whole chapter. You can see that here.

However, in this article, I’ll be marking how you can still show and give details, without making your characters directly talk.

Let’s go straight to an example; I never give advice without examples because I never learned anything without them. General advice sounds like jargon to me. Haha. 

 So, here is the dialogue. Let’s say your chapter 4 or 5 begins straight like this—

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