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Oh, man, people are gonna kill me for this, but…
…I just lost interest. I didn't find the voices believable. It just felt like a middle aged guy writing his idea of what being a young woman is and it didn't work for me. I hate saying this, because clearly his intentions were great and the art is ridiculous and the craft is amazing.
But the core did not hold for me and I quit reading.
I feel a bit like a traitor for even saying it. Maybe I should go back and give it another look?