WHY YOUR WEATHER PARAS ARE NOT WORKING
Alright. You are starting your book with weather descriptions. Sometimes, it follows on to the next page! And the character is still not there. And readers start wondering if this is a fiction with a character or is it a Geography book in the study section. The same thing happens when you keep giving settings, too.
Now, this part is tricky. You can't keep the MC hanging on space, you do need a line or two about setting + time + even weather. Yes. Maybe in a line or two? And when you do that you have to add the tension.
This is it. "TENSION" is all that you need to write those lines of weather and settings.
Let me give an example: If you haven't read Mistborn yet, (I'm still reading it), go, search in google, and look at the first page. Do you see how the author gives the world + weather para?
Do you see what he really did there? You don't? Ok, here it is.
Now, this part is tricky. You can't keep the MC hanging on space, you do need a line or two about setting + time + even weather. Yes. Maybe in a line or two? And when you do that you have to add the tension.
This is it. "TENSION" is all that you need to write those lines of weather and settings.
Let me give an example: If you haven't read Mistborn yet, (I'm still reading it), go, search in google, and look at the first page. Do you see how the author gives the world + weather para?
Do you see what he really did there? You don't? Ok, here it is.
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