Took about 30 minutes to work on my own stuff--went over ...

Took about 30 minutes to work on my own stuff--went over the first scene in Chapter 11, which is a continuation of the end of chapter 10. As I worked through it, I suddenly realized there's a lot going on here; maybe four or more story/character threads are subtly sharpened and carried a little further into the story.

If a character pukes, does that count as action?