A Bit of a Bard
Yeah, yeah, I know....I'm a Grammar Nazi, and there are those, albeit few, who even say I'm rather a "Karen" when it comes to people misquoting quips and idioms. It really is "toe the line" not "tow the line". I don't understand how somethings are so hard to figure out.
I've always been a wordsmith, and to show you what I mean, I have been writing deep deep thought out poetry since I was about 11 years old. Now, mind you, the really sexy stuff didn't come along until I was over 18 probably. I don't think I really even noticed most guys until about 17 and then it was just eye candy and girl-gossip really. I did however, manage to pen a few good tales and make them rhyme either intentionally or by complicated accident. Enjoy this particular piece titled "Symphony of Love". It wasn't written for anyone on particular. I wasn't raging with passion for anyone at the time I wrote it. I do like it though, and some day I may "mewl" again, but for now I just sigh and remember that my fantasies and dreams were so much more interesting than my actual choices.
Symphony of Love
Is my voice a symphony
Do I rage with song
When our hearts are melding
Two becoming one
Are your notes of tenor
Forced with breathless thrust
Are the whisperings of woodwinds
Leaping from my tongue
Quicken heart! Hold time
Surround the sound—silence
Mewl for no one else to hear
My lover’s lips shall thunder
Rage, lift up my very soul
In crescendo—rapture!
Deep inside, harmonious tides
Melodies—captured
Songs for only our ears
Sweet in every note
Panting—exhausted refrain
Music is your stroke
Sing sweet lover to me
Your song a kind surrender
Symphonic pleas, submission
Orchestra in motion
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