The 1st-10-pg mistakes I hate: Part-2

I have been critiquing for a while already. Reading many manuscripts—often just the beginning of the few chapters, I find myself repeating the same points to everyone. So, I thought, I would point them on my blog and add the link from the next time along with the feedback, if I’m giving a free critique.
1. Telling, not showing: Just admit it. No matter how many times you hear it, you are always delivering your first draft just because, you found someone who is critiquing for free/ for cheap. Ever...