Want to know how to be a good writer? Be a good reader. When you read, you are taking in so much that you don't even realize. You're actually studying other authors.
As you read, you know when your heart starts racing. What did the author do to make you do that? Was it a turn of a phrase or the build up? Take that and put it into your own work. (not the scene but the method) Do you like how an author develops a character? How did they do it?
The more you read, the more you learn. Then when you write apply what you learned. Remember how a scene worked in one book and see if you can do the same thing with your own unique scene. It can be so much fun.
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