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edits: the journey
So far, the edits are going pretty well. Some light tweaks, nothing bad.
Except...
In every story, there are certain words/phrases I overuse. For DD, it was ethereal. In WiB, lovely. So far, for AD, I seem to have been very fond of using shhh and mmmm. One pops up (heh) in sex scenes, the other in thought.
It just takes a little thought to fix these edits. It does make me wonder what my favorite word will be for AM, though. Will there be several hmmm, to continue the theme, or something new?
I can't wait until I finish AM (and AT) and find out :)
Except...
In every story, there are certain words/phrases I overuse. For DD, it was ethereal. In WiB, lovely. So far, for AD, I seem to have been very fond of using shhh and mmmm. One pops up (heh) in sex scenes, the other in thought.
It just takes a little thought to fix these edits. It does make me wonder what my favorite word will be for AM, though. Will there be several hmmm, to continue the theme, or something new?
I can't wait until I finish AM (and AT) and find out :)
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