The Final Readthrough – The Climb #516

Wednesday 22nd July 2020

Today I managed to get the final tweaks done to the draft.

I finished by rewriting a conversation designed to impart a little of the lore without being an infodump.  It also gave me chance to expand the racial diversity of my world a little.  I always try and make those scenes very dialogue heavy with interesting characters so the reader is laughing along with the conversation rather than feeling they’re being lectured.  I think it’s better than what was there.

And with ...