I've Got a Bone to Pick… What About Was?

I have multiple sources I could quote. Maybe you'veheard it before: A writer must write in an active voice, not passive. Thatleads us to little words like "was" and "were."
I recently went to a popular bookstore and askedfor copies of the top romance authors. All covers touted that the authors were USA Today or New York Timesbestsellers. The first thing I noticedwas "was". Wases here, wases there,wases everywhere.
Here's the stats on the top six authors:
AUTHOR WAS IN FIRST SENTENCE # OF WASES INFIRST 25 LINES Author A 1 6 Author B 1 6 Author C 1 7 Author D 1 7 Author E 0 5 Author F 1 5
I'm shocked. What about you? Another rule from literary agents, publishersand expert authors has been not to open the bookwith the backstory. Many of these bestsellers did. Shocker! I have to admit, I'ma bit confused. What about the rules? What makes these authors top sellers? What'syour opinion? Tell me, tell me, tell me. (Can you hear the panting?)
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Published on December 05, 2011 08:47
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