I know that any story should be about hte present relationship. It is something I learnt long before I started getting revisions. SO why then did I write an intrigue plot that had solely to do with the past? And why did the main conflict twist itself into an overly repetitive point about who knew what when? Why can't I learn from my mistakes?
The story will become good. It does have potential. I just need to exclude the parts that detract from the central relationship... I have done revisions ...
Published on October 09, 2009 01:24