Being Mindful: A Free Mini-Course in Writing – Part Three

We’ve gone (as we shifted POVs) from ‘Macomber’s wife’ to ‘Mrs Macomber.’  Where do you think we’ll go to from there?  Read ahead and find out, if you like, and then come back and tell me it was all accidental.

Now, from her POV, we get the expositional paragraph describing Robert Wilson.  Note that we’ve had her description (from an outside narrator), and now Wilson’s, but this time from a filtered POV (hers), which, through its immaculate detailing, is actually delivering some serious subte...