Day 2,435: Small Wins, Big Wins

Just had a small win: had a little breakthrough on a scene.





Pro tip: if you’re ever writing a scene, particularly an EARLY scene for a new character, and it’s just not feeling right? Take a look at whether they’re the most active in the scene, or if someone else is. If they’re not the most active, that’s probably why the scene doesn’t feel like it’s working. Switch it up. Make THEM the one doing the most, driving the action, and the other person doing the reacting.





Small win.





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Published on June 30, 2020 23:05
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