WIP Diagnostic: Is This Working? A Closer Look at a Screenplay

Critique By Maria D'Marco

WIP Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specific issues. Readers are encouraged to send in work with questions, and we diagnose it on the site. It’s part critique, part example, and designed to help the submitter as well as anyone else having a similar problem.

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Submissions currently in the queue: Four

Please Note: As of today, critique slots are booked through May 1.

This week’s question: Do you think it/they work?

Market/Genre: Screenplay

JH Note: Something very different this week—a screenplay. I know nothing about them, but Maria has had experience here, so I thought we’d give it a whirl.

On to the diagnosis…
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