A bit of a hiccup

I was going along smoothly with Creations of the Galaxy, already having realized that the way the story headed, it was a bit different than I planned. I previously mentioned that it ended up headed toward more of a discovery tale than anything else. A story about connection, not where my mind headed, which was take down that place (place being where Prism was created) and action-ish. Think it was last week that I realized the changeroo happenin?

Then yesterday I had a bit of a hiccup. When I...