Consistency in Writing

For the last couple of weeks, the SSH Mastery copyeditor has said "There's something wrong with Chapter 13, but I can't figure out what it is." I told her that I had confidence in her ability to figure it out and to just do her best. (I wasn't actually confident, but telling her that would have guaranteed that she would not have found it.) The copyedits came back this weekend, along with the following table.

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