It works better if you take the brake off

Oh, I did not get hardly anything done yesterday.  The tweaks to chapter three blew chapter four to bits, and I spent all day weighing options because the tweaks were so much better for the story.  I'm keeping to a short post today because I have to throw chapter four out entirely and rework the chapter from basically scratch.  Ow.  I broke my ending, too, but I figure I'll find a way go get her where she needs to be another way by the time I reach that page.   Mmmm, yeah.

We did get snow, just an inch or so.  I can tell the experienced drivers from the newbies by how fast they are going past my window. There are going to be some fender benders today.