An Unusual Editing Story

By Terry Whalin @terrywhalin



If you love thrillers and
adventure stories, a legendy writer of these books recently passed away. I'm
talking about Clive Cussler. Recently in Publishers Weekly, one of
Cussler's long-time editors, Neil Nygren wrote a fascinating article, “An Editor Remembers Clive Cussler” (follow the link to read
the full article). The full article is great but there is one paragraph I want
to highlight here. Speaking about Cussler, Nygren wrote:



“The last time he’d switched
publishers, he said, it was to a major house with a justly famed editor. When
Clive turned in his first manuscript, however, it came back heavily
revised—pencil marks all over the pages. This did not please Clive. He took the
manuscript and, on the top of the first page, he wrote one word: stet. Nothing
more. And then he wrote the same word on the top of every page in the entire
manuscript. And then he sent it all back. A couple of days later—as he told it
to me—he got a panicked call from the editor asking him to come to the house’s
New York office to talk. Clive declined, stating that “it would be...
inconvenient.” That book was published the way he wrote it.”



I pulled this paragraph to point
out some editorial details to you:



1. Cussler knew his
readers and what they wanted with his books. Most writers are
not in touch with the needs and desires of their readers. I'm certain
this information came over time but Cussler knew the expectations of his readers
and when he wrote, he was focused on meeting those needs.



2. As a best-selling
author, Cussler knew not to change because of the editor's
suggestions.  Make sure you notice some of the other details in
Nygren's story: Cussler was with a major publisher and working with a famous
editor who put pencil editorial marks on all of his pages. The novelist did
review the ssuggested editorial changes but could see these changes were going
to change the fabic of his story and he was going to lose more than he was going
to gain.



3. Most writers do not
fall into such rare territory. i call this an unusual editing story
because from my years in publishing, the opposite is normally true. Editors are
focused on readers and producing and excellent product. Their detailed insights
are important for you as a writer to pick up on and respond to their directions.
This sort of team work produces excellent manuscripts. I don't want to pretend
it is easy because it is not but it an important part of the editorial process
to produce excellent work. Cussler was an exception more than the
norm.



I've worked with writers who want
to debate their editor over every single word changed. These writers are not the
type that editors love and want to work with on another book project. The word
about the writer's reaction is quick to get out to others in this small
community.  Editors are not your enemy but should be your colleague to help you
produce an excellent book.



Admittedly Clive Cussler was
unusual about how he handled this edited manuscript. What lessons and insights
have you gained as you have worked with different editors? Let me know in the
comments below.



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