There is nothing wrong with the grammar or punctuation or syntax and pacing. I had a professional editor from Book Baby edit the first 100 pages. The first two people who read it on Goodreads and my professional reviewers gave me a 4 to 5 star. In the first three chapters, my characters are Lebanese from Beirut speaking English they live in Beirut that is the way they speak English I am authentic to my characters?
Published on February 17, 2020 14:54